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Posts Tagged ‘Groups’

Don’t Believe The Hype, It Hurts Later

June 27, 2012 Mathias Leave a comment

Just recently, a new member came into our author’s group. She is a nice enough girl with a lot of great ideas and good critiques on other people’s work. After getting through the trial period she was allowed to beginning getting critiques on her own material.  “You’re gonna love this story I wrote,” she beamed once submitting the book she has been working on. “Everyone else has,” added.

She was not so chipper after the critique of her first five chapters came back. No one was mean, but they were honest. The new girl’s face turned red with a cross between rage and embarrassment as reviews were given.

The critique centered around:
– lots of misused words that were not synonyms for what she wanted to say
– the fact that in the first five chapters (two scenes each) there were 10 different POV characters
– there appeared to be eight different plots happening with none standing out as the main one
– run-on sentences galore Read more…

Categories: General Things, Good Stuff, The Writing Process Tags: Best Friends, Critique, Darkened Moon, Embarrassment, Emotional Attachment, Feelings, Groups, Honest Opinion, Hype, Initial Shock, Many People, New Girl, New Member, Quality Feedback, Rage, Reviewers, Run On Sentences, Sorts, Synonyms, Trial Period, Tw, Two Friends

Why Review Groups Are Helpful

May 30, 2012 Mathias Leave a comment

A trusted group of people you can use to review what you write is invaluable. Gathering up the feedback from my own group, I compiled the information into a list that has helped immensely during the latest edit of my novel, Under the Darkened Moon.

My review group consisted of a few published authors, some unpublished authors and friends and acquaintances who like to read fantasy fiction. At the end of the last edit here is what I learned based on their feed back:

Strong points:
1 – Characters and character development
2 – Plot
3 – Pacing
4 – The ability to keep the reader guessing

Weak points:
1 – Comma usage
2 – Non main plot elements/background

So this tells me where I needed to focus. Grammar was the big thing. Sentences weren’t horrid, but many of the could definitely been improved. That is what I am focusing on fixing at the moment.

Categories: Editing, Form and Style, The Writing Process Tags: Acquaintances, Authors And Friends, Character Development, Comma Usage, Darkened Moon, Fantasy Fiction, Grammar, Groups, Novel, Plot Elements, Sentences, Strong Points, Unpublished Authors

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