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Under the Darkened Moon Critiques (Both Good And Bad)

September 28, 2012 Mathias Leave a comment

I encourage people to say what they really think whenever they are reading my work in progress (Under the Darkened Moon). I haven’t had it in a formal review setting since I started the live read and final draft process. But, prior to that, I got a lot of feedback from a variety of sources including: my standard review group, writer friends of mine (published and unpublished), and people who I know and who like to read fantasy.

I’m not someone who isn’t willing to let people, whether they liked the book or not, have their say. Here is a sampling of the good and the bad that I got as feedback: Read more…

Categories: General Things, Good Stuff, Review Groups, The Writing Process Tags: Bad People, Darkened Moon, Dialogue, Elves, Emotions, Epic Fantasy, Feedback, Final Draft, Genre, Limited, Love Story, Motivation, Opposites, Point Of View, Prose, Sampling, Story Flow, Work In Progress, World Description, Writer Friends

Under The Darkened Moon Update

May 4, 2012 Mathias Leave a comment

My review group has just finished up the first 26 chapters of my novel Under the Darkened Moon. Good feedback so far with several helpful comments. I have selected the ones I feel are addressable, some of them just aren’t, and have begun weaving fixes into the story.

Right now the novel stands at about 146,000 words. After originally trimming the story back from a 200,000 word first draft and down to 130,000 words, it has given me some room to make these additions over time.

My plans are to get my review group then next ten chapters or so this weekend and perhaps even tonight.

Categories: "Dark Moon", Projects, The Writing Process Tags: Additions, Chapters, Darkened Moon, Feedback, First Draft, Novel, Weaving

Weeding Down My Review Group

April 16, 2012 Mathias Leave a comment

I admit it. When I gathered up people to review my work and give me feedback on my stories that I accepted all comers. I was just thrilled that friends and acquaintances were interested. But as time goes on, it is clear that I need to prune back the group which is like an overgrown tree.

As I have recently tweeted, I let one woman go because she never had anything nice to say about anything. Every comment was snarky and unhelpful to the point of nitpicking. The straw that broke the camel’s back was when she started complaining that I was “showing” where she thought I should be “telling” and visa versa. Not one passage was right to her. She also complained about me having a scene at night when she felt certain it should be during the day. Nothing pleased her and, after conferring with several others reviewing my work, I decided that she was just a bitter person who might know how to write, but who did not know how to deal with other authors.

On the opposite end of the spectrum I have today told another reviewer who “loves” everything and never has a critical thing to say about my work that if she does not start actually critiquing and start giving more than 100% kudos that I will have to drop her from the group as well. I don’t need a “yes man/woman”. I need real opinions.

I will be looking at other people in the review group over the coming weeks as well to try and make the group stronger. I want to produce a good product. The only way to do that is to have serious opinions I can trust.

Categories: The Writing Process Tags: Acquaintances, Bitter Person, Camel, Comers, Feedback, Kudos, Man Woman, People, Spectrum, Visa, Yes Man
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