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Posts Tagged ‘Dialogue’

The Naming Game

December 21, 2012 Mathias Leave a comment

Under the Darkened Moon once had a character named Kal.  Kal, alas, is no more.  Oh, he still exists in the story, but he is no longer called Kal.  His new name in the final manuscript is Tarek.

Why did I change his name?  Ultimately it was because too many characters had names starting with the letter K.  Kyel and Kath were enough, so I changed Kal to something else.

The decision was made easier during the live read edit when my wife was reading the story.  She has this particular drawl to her speech where she constantly replaces the “a” sound in words with an “e” and visa versa.  She also does the same thing with the “e”s to “i”s for some reason.  But she only does it on certain words.  For example, pen is pin, but ten is not tin.  She never pronounced one of the characters, called Den, as Din. Read more…

Categories: "Dark Moon", Editing, Novels, Projects, The Writing Process Tags: Darkened Moon, Dialogue, Drawl, Game, Kath, Kel, Manuscript, Many Names, Tin, Visa, Wife Story

Book Review: The Choosing, written by Jeremy Laszio

October 26, 2012 Mathias Leave a comment

Full disclosure: I received a free copy of The Choosing from Mr. Laszio in exchange for an honest review. 

WARNING! May contain spoilers!

The Choosing, I’m sorry to say, had a very, very difficult time even registering on my scale of 0 to 5 stars.  For the first three quarters of the book, I was seriously considering giving it less than one star.  The short reasoning for this is that this story is simply not on par with what I expect from a fantasy novel.  I think my standards are fairly reasonable.  But honestly, The Choosing feels like an unedited, or only lightly edited, draft of a story.  It is missing so much.  It does tell a story, but stumbles in doing so.  And in my opinion the story is not that solid.
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Categories: Book Reviews Tags: Amount Of Time, Ashton, Charisma, Dialogue, Expositions, Fantasy Novel, Full Disclosure, Love At First Sight, Minutia, Narrative, Paragraph, Prose, Romance, Sara, Seth, Sexual Tension, Shallow Characters, Temples, Three Quarters, Window Shopping

Finally There – Under the Darkened Moon Manuscript Phase

October 20, 2012 Mathias Leave a comment

With FINAL edits done, I am now on to the manuscript compilation phase for Under the Darkened Moon.  Ok, so “FINAL” edit is probably a misnomer because compiling the manuscript does entail some minor editing.  I’m still looking for errors, but mostly it will consist mostly of formatting.

However, I do read each chapter one, final time.  In the process, I am looking for: Read more…

Categories: "Dark Moon", Editing, Novels, Projects, The Writing Process Tags: Compilation, Darkened Moon, Dialogue, Formatting, Manuscript, Misnomer, Missing Words, Moon Phase, Running, Sentence Structure, Speech Engine, Structure Issues, Swimmingly, Text To Speech, Tts Software
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